writing my own instructions

I am proud of my writing because I put my all my steps in order. Something that challenged me was thinking about the steps and making a list of what you need.

How to shear a sheep

Did you know that there are different kinds  of sheep

ewes, rams, lambs.

You need

* 2 or 3 strong  people to help to grab The sheep  

* a woolly sheep so you can shear the wool off the

Sheep's back  

*clippers  and a mission (machine) to make them go

*Back brace

Step 1 sharpen the combs with a grinder with sandpaper on it

Step 2 drag the sheep out of the pen

Step 3 click the counter

Step 4 start by shaving the wool of its head

Step 5 shear the rest off the  the body.

Step 6 when you're done  push it out the square hole then it will run out to the  farm were (where) the other sheep are then a big truck comes and picks the sheep up.